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06-23-2006, 06:37 AM
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06-23-2006, 09:16 AM
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I liked the rythm in your Rain poem....and also felt the imporing feelings in untold! You've nice touch there...carry on Niaz!
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When GOD says ... When God says YES, He gives U what U want. When He says NO, He gives U something better. But! When He says wait, He wishes to give U the best..... And God says to me "Moni..........."
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06-23-2006, 10:35 AM
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Very nice Niaz...like Moni said...I also like the "Rain" with the rhythm...and u'r "Untold" is very touching...put me in a bitter-sweet mood...Loved it.
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06-23-2006, 10:57 AM
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wow both poems are excellent...enjoyed them very much
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06-23-2006, 02:16 PM
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^ Wow..I love stories....post them soon...but bro. try to keep it short
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When GOD says ... When God says YES, He gives U what U want. When He says NO, He gives U something better. But! When He says wait, He wishes to give U the best..... And God says to me "Moni..........."
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03-18-2007, 06:39 PM
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yeah, i cud so feel the rythm. it was so easy to rap along to. lol
keep it up, u sud start writing song lyrics next for Akon. lol t cre
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03-23-2007, 06:41 PM
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wow great poems...that quote sounds familiar lol
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